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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇表达丰富多彩，但是要留意单词拼写；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
Whether advertisement can influence personal preference With the wide used of the internet,advertisement has become a popular thing in our day-to-day life.However,the debate about whether advertisements can influence personal preference are right on their way. Indeed,advertisement has arised a extreme effect on the choose of certain people,who may tend to purpase the brand that they saw by the TV,internet,vedio so and forth.Perhaps it is the popularity rather than their inner ideas that lead to the final choose.Especially for those who are crazy about on line shopping,the advertisement is capable to stimulate their perception of goods,then a cheaper price might urge shoppers to buy them at last.For instance,the Xiaomi adversier adopt attractive activities ,that grasp the product in a cheaper price in the scheduled time,eventually win the market.The effect of advertisement is so strongly as to people all turn a blind to the quality of it.Above all,the attitudes of consumption has been change by the advertisement for most people. However,for others,advertisement can not function well.People may spend a lot of time and huge money to purchase a product that is really attractive to them,whether the thing is a high price or not in sell for the time being.Despite other good that advertisement recommend can replace it,individuals would adhere to their original opinion.On on acount need a disirable good to spread with a advertisement,it has distinct feature from others,which is adquate to appaling to consumers.Consequently,the Advertisement is a not considerable factor when they would like to go shopping. Personally,I stand in the side of making the decision of consumption in a sensible way in spite of advertisement around us .Probably we are able to to get a more satisfying result with a second thought instead of believing our eye at the first sight. Though the potential different influence that advertisement give rise to us vary from person to person,it will be advisable for us to make the optimal choice in the end ,in order to prevent the extral price.
