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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇基本功不错，高级词汇表达灵活熟练；作者在句法层面做的很棒。
Whether advertisement can influence personal preference With the wide used of the internet,advertisement has become a popular thing in our day-to-day life.However,the debate about whether advertisements can influence personal preference are right on their way. Indeed,advertisement has arised a considerable effect on the taste of certain people,who may tend to purchase the brand that they saw by the TV,internet,vedio so and forth.Perhaps it is the popularity rather than their intrinsic ideas that lead to the final choose.Especially for those who are crazy about on line shopping,the advertisement is capable to stimulate their perception of goods,then a cheaper price might urge shoppers to buy them at last.For instance,the Xiaomi merchants adopt attractive activities ,selling the product in a cheaper price in the scheduled time,eventually win the market.The effect of advertisement is so strongly as to people may turn a blind eye to its quality of.Above all,the attitude towards consumption has been changed by the advertisement for most people. However,for others,advertisement cannot function well.People may spend a lot of time and huge money to purchase a product that is really attractive to them,whether the thing is a high price or not in sell for the time being.Despite other good that advertisement recommend can replace it,individuals would adhere to their original opinion.On on account need a desirable good to spread with an advertisement,which has distinct feature compared with others and this feature is definitely able to appaling to consumers.Consequently,the Advertisement is a not considerable factor when they would like to go shopping. Personally,I stand in the side of pay for somethings in a sensible way in spite of advertisement around us .Probably we are able to make a more satisfying result with a second thought instead of believing our eyes at the first sight. Though the influences that advertisement give rise to us vary from person to person,it will be advisable for us to make the optimal choice in the end ,in order to prevent the extra price.
