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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(39):新的班集体

发布时间:2013-07-29 18:23浏览次数:471
要求:
假设你是舟山中学的学生李越,班里从外地转来一名同学李华,他一时无法融入新的班集体中,感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
☆帮他分析原因
☆给他提出建议
☆陈述你帮助他的具体打算

注意:

词数120左右


Dear Li Hua,
I'm very glad to become your classmate. I know you are worried about your study and don't know how to adapt yourself to the new environment. ____________________________________________________________________
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Best regards,
Yours,
                                            Li Yue
用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;简单句有点多,从句数量使用不足;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

In order to you can get alone well with our classmates,i put forward four suggestions.First,you should introduce youself to our classmates.Such as where are you from?What sport do you like best?Who is you best friend and so on.Second,you can try to talk with classmates or join in their topic make use of you free time.Come up your opinion and communicate with them in bold.Last but not least,open you heart to meet new environment.The state of mind is most important.Don't be shy and worry,i am sure that as long as you sincere communication with our classmates,you can adapt yourself to the new environment soon.I believe you.Come on!

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