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In order to you can get alone well with our classmates,i put forward four suggestions.First,you should introduce youself to our classmates.Such as where are you from?What sport do you like best?Who is you best friend and so on.Second,you can try to talk with classmates or join in their topic make use of you free time.Come up your opinion and communicate with them in bold.Last but not least,open you heart to meet new environment.The state of mind is most important.Don't be shy and worry,i am sure that as long as you sincere communication with our classmates,you can adapt yourself to the new environment soon.I believe you.Come on!