句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中用词稍显贫乏;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
The Most Interesting Place of My Campus If a foreign friend of mine is coming to visit my campus,I will be very happy and I will take her to some interesting places of my campus. Firstly,I will walk with her in the campus in order to appreciate beautiful views.I hope she can know about my campus academic atmosphere and enjoy it. Secindly,I will take her to our restaurant. The meal of it is very delicious.I will order special food to her. At the last,I will take her to the most interesting place of my campus.It is our library.It is because that our library is very famous.Its appreciation is very serious.It collects many books in order to students look through.And it has many studying–rooms ang computer's rooms to help us study.Our library is very classical and it is a good place to study. I hope she can like our campus.