恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;请作者增加词汇丰富度,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
Nowadys,knowledage is power.Therefor,more and more people read books,the new matter was caused that reading selectively or extensively? different people hold different altitude towarding the matter. Some people believe that we should read slectively.there are two factors.first,it is not useful not only all books,but also all knowledage. second,we can save some time to read books clearly.