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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10532
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;复杂句采用很棒;文中学术词汇表达比较恰当,但单词拼写不够认真;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

In our contry, 56 ethnics co-exist with their unique culture, including their languages--dialects. But for a better understanding, we adopt a unite language, that is Mandarin. And I proclaim that the dialects should not be used in public places. First of all, it is needless to say that language is used to communicate and interact with people. If we just speak dialects instead of Mandarin, we can not understand each other unless we master every second dialect, which is far beyoud our ability and time. And as a result, language will fail to achieve its function. Secondly, once dialects are accepted in pulic places, people would not bother to study Mandarin but just be occupied in their own culture and group, which will da harm to culture combining and restrain the birth of new culture. All in all, dialects should be the last one to be acceptable in public places for the sake of people's life and the infusing of diverse cultures.

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