语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够使用一些不错的从句;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。
In recent years,around us,a growing number of people have done something without thinking carefully,and after doing that,most of them regrete for what they have done.Therefore, it is unwise to make a decision as soon as you hear or see something. There are several factors can account for this phenomonon.Firstly,with the increase of the speed of life pace,people do not have enough time to think what they should do next,they can olny walk along with their intriution. Secondly,more and more people do not want to use their brain to think too much question.or,you can say,they become more lazy.Last but not least,people like do something that others people are doing. From what has been discussed above.It is time that effective measures be taken for stopping this phnomonon,most importantly,We shoud learn to thik carefully when we decide to do something.do not follow others
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