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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视。

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In recent years,a growing number of people have done something without thinking carefully around us,,and after doing that,most of them regret for what they have done.Therefore, it is unwise to make a decision as soon as you hearing or seeing something. There are several factors can account for this phenomenon.Firstly,with the increase of the speed of life pace,people do not have enough time to think what they should do next,they can olny walk along with their intuition. Secondly,more and more people do not want to use their brain to think too much question.or,you can say,they become more lazy.Last but not least,people like do something that others people are doing. From what has been discussed above.It is time that effective measures be taken for stopping this phnomenon,most importantly,We shoud learn to think carefully when we decide to do something.do not follow others

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