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In recent years,a growing number of people have done something without thinking carefully around us,,and after doing that,most of them regret for what they have done.Therefore, it is unwise to make a decision as soon as you hearing or seeing something. There are several factors can account for this phenomenon.Firstly,with the increase of the speed of life pace,people do not have enough time to think what they should do next,they can olny walk along with their intuition. Secondly,more and more people do not want to use their brain to think too much question.or,you can say,they become more lazy.Last but not least,people like do something that others people are doing. From what has been discussed above.It is time that effective measures be taken for stopping this phnomenon,most importantly,We shoud learn to think carefully when we decide to do something.do not follow others
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