语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;很好的运用了从句,同时句法错误极少。
In recent years,a growing number of people have done something without thinking carefully around us,,and after doing that,most of them regret for what they have done.Therefore, it is unwise to make a decision as soon as you hearing or seeing something. Several reasons can account for this phenomenon.Firstly,with the increasing of the speed of life pace,people do not have enough time to think what they should do next,they can only walk along with their intuition. Secondly,more and more people do not want to use their brain to think too much question.or,you can say,they become more lazy.Last but not least,people like doing something that others people are doing. to sum up.It is time that effective measures should be taken for stopping this phnomenon,most importantly,We should learn to think carefully when we decide to do something,and only by this way,we can do everything more perfect.
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