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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法基础较为扎实。

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In recent years,a growing number of people have done something without thinking carefully around us,,and after doing that,most of them regret for what they have done.Therefore, it is unwise to make a decision as soon as you hearing or seeing something. Several reasons can account for this phenomenon.Firstly,with the increasing of the speed of life pace,people do not have enough time to think what they should do next,they can only walk along with their intuition. Secondly,more and more people do not want to use their brain to think too much question.or,you can say,they become lazier.Last but not least,people like doing something that others people are doing. to sum up,it is time that effective measures should be taken for stopping this phenomenon,most importantly,we should learn to think carefully when we decide to do something,and only by this way,we can do everything more perfect.

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