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Tom 邀请Wei Hong 参加他这周日的生日宴会，但Wei Hong的父母出差要到下个月回来，奶奶又卧病在床，需要人照顾。再说数学考试即将来临，因此，无法前去参加生日宴会。Li Ping感到很抱歉，只好给他写了封e-mail表示感谢。
e-mail开头已写好。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；作者词汇表达丰富度不足，也请仔细检查文章的单词拼写。
My parents is work to go out and come back untill next month , More important, my grandmother is ill, so she need somebody look afther her. In addition to，the match examiple will coming.so,i'm so sorry that i can't go to your birthday party,I hope you forgive me and wish you have a good birthday party
