2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦136:进城

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

Li hua is a good student, Because his parents are work in the city, so he go to the city with his parents and continue to study in Xinhua High School.When he frist go to the Xinhua High School, he meet some diffcults .but his teacher and classmates are help he ,he get progress