2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In my eyes,the most fascinating place in my hometown is the Shanghai Stadium. It definitely is the cradle of imagination and creativity. As soon as you enter the stadium, varieties of exhibits will enter your horizons. Entiques and paintings are all telling your their stories and history. As the saying goes,sowing virtue and the harvest will be virtue. These exhibits can cultivate people's love of art and help them get inner peace.