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Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists Nowadys,with the futher developition of University Campus ,more and more people choose to have a good trip on it.They can have a good view on the especial sights of school,and feel the criticism of the University. However,it always brings about a series of problems.people have difference ideas in the issue whether the University Campus should be open to tourists.Some people think it is good for kids to feel the atmosphere and borden their horizons.what's more ,it can fulfil many people's dream that they eager to study in the University.but other people disagree with it .They thought that it can destroy the pricinple of school,which have a bad effect on students' study. In my opinion,i think the University should be open to tourists . If we often go there ,we can learn a lot about the culture of the school ,and if i am a student in high school ,i will study for it.But we should obey the rule ,and travel around it culturally.If we do these ,we can gain a lot from it.
