2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者用词较为灵活，但有较多拼写错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒。

If my friend to visit my hometown,I wil take him/her to see the Yuntai montions,and why i will take him/he to there? Now,i live in the Jiaozuo.This is a very nice city ,I have benn in there three years.I known alittle about it.The Yuntai mountions is in here.It contions four beauitiful place,for eample Hingshi Xia,Zhuyun Feng ,Dienv Tong,Monkey mountions.The Zhuyun feng is very high,and the hangle is very intersted. The Hingshi Xia has very beauitiful xia . The Dienv Tong need you to take a trip,When the bus through it at a high speed,you wil feel a intersting thing. The Monkey mountions has a lot of monkeys .they can perfome for us. I fell The Yuntai mountions is a very nice place.