语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
As a representation of English course , i find a part of students lose their confidence in English , but today english is become more and more important , i hope my words below can be helpful for you to rebuild your confidence in english. As you know, china is raising, more and more foreign businessman are coming to china for business, it means we will have a lot of time to communicate with these foreigners in our future work, so how can we abandon our english? I know that it is not easy to improve your english in short time, but if we have some skills, i think it will be helpful for us to improve it more quickly and happily. First of all, we need to watch films with english subtitle, film can entertain us extraordinary, therefore it will make our learning more interesting. Second, it is a good choice to reading english fiction, fiction can also entertain us, as a result it will also make our learning interesting. But the most important thing is to chat with our english teacher in english, during the chatting, our teacher will eager to teach more knowledge about english to us.