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湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:13浏览次数:2762
要求:
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是一名英语课代表,发现部分同学对英语学习失去了信心。请你写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文来鼓励他们,唤起其对学习英语的兴趣。
写作要点:
1、学习英语的重要性。
2、提高英语成绩的措施(至少3点)。
用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。

用户练习作文:

As a representation of English course , i find a part of students lose their confidence in English , but today english is become more and more important , i hope my words below can be helpful for you to rebuild your confidence in english. As you know, china is raising, more and more foreign businessman are coming to china for business, it means we will have a lot of time to communicate with these foreigners in our future work, so how can we abandon our english? I know that it is not easy to improve your english in short time, but if we have some skills, i think it will be helpful for us to improve it more quickly and happily. First of all, we need to watch films with english subtitle, film can entertain us extraordinary, therefore it will make our learning more interesting. Second, it is a good choice to reading english fiction, fiction can also entertain us, as a result it will also make our learning interesting. But the most important thing is to chat with our english teacher in english, during the chatting, our teacher will eager to teach more knowledge about english to us.

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