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Save your money As students, we are careful with our money in daily life.Collecting all kinds of coupons, looking for group-buy deals and buying clothes on sale are all the great ways to save money.But above all,we should be a smart consumer.I believe most of us have that experiences,we often buy some useless things which just catch our eyes in that moment.So we always spend more money than we thought.To be a smart consumer,you should make a list before you go shopping.All things you need to buy should be written in the list and when you go shopping,buy just as the list tell. When i was a junior high school student,my parents always gave me pocket money at the beginning of the month.But when i went to the supermarket,i ran out of the money at once.And i would have a misery life in the rest time of that month. I complained to my mom that I was lack of money and she should give me more. But she shook her head and told me that:" my dear,let me ask you some questions.Everytime you went to the supermarket,what would you want to buy?""I only want to buy some snacks and daily necessities for my whole month.""Yes,that's true,but don't you realize that everytime you return from the supermarket you always take some other things that you don't need at all.Some things that you will never touch after you buy it.""That's true,mom, but I can't stop myself.They just look amazing when I saw them in the supermarket.I can't help buying them although i knew they are useless.""my sweet heart,you should be a smart consumer.Before you go shopping you should write a list and write down the things you need to buy so that you will not get lost in so many things at market.""Thanks,mom,i got it and i will try."From that time,I always make a list before shopping.How amazing it is,it do works.I save lots of money from then. So if you want to save money,please be a smart consumer.Make a list before you go shopping and then you will buy things you need it rather than you want it at that moment.
