2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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Currently,parents sent their children to art classes is a universally prevalent and pervasive phenomenon.from which we are able to draw a profound conclusion that the competition between new brons become more and more heating. people's interpretations,however,are divergent on this issue.a large quantites of people hold that nothing is more important than to receive kinds of education so that children can adopt the social rules immediatelly.whereas others totally stand on the opposite side,they think the most and important is that parents never think adout weather child like or not,kind as our parents is,the happiness of children are by no means satisfactory. From my perspective,Admittedly,sent children to art classes give rise to some social problems,but i insist that it is worthy of being highly applauded.It is universally acknowledged that parents will never do harm for children.