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从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，单词拼写方面要认真。
What a thout-provoking scene it is! As is vividly depicted in the picture above, an employer turned down a job applicant because the job applicant only have a master's degree. Obviously, the purpose of this picture is to reavel a not un-common phenomenon in our life. What qualities should an employer look for in job applicants? Different people have different opinions.
