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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2873[网页划词已开启]
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分86.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,学术词汇积累也做的很棒;作者应增加从句的使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

From what is vividly depicted by the cartoon above,we can observe distinctly that a traveler who happily starts his journey by high speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan thinks that the technology creats a great number of pleasantly surprised for us.In the years of 2009,the high speed railway between Wuhan and Guangzhou went into operation,reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours,bring much convenience to the transportation among the two cities. Science and technology are the primary productive forces,which play a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand,progress in science and technology promotes economic and social progress greatly.Firstly,the railway becomes a new engine of booming of regional economic.Secondly,the railway helps to attract so many tourists that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least,the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand,it is with the development of science and technology,such as the operation of high speed trandportation,video phone,webcam meeting,that the world has become smaller and smaller. Apparently,it is a tradition for Chinese Government to attach a great importance to the advances in science and technology.Science and technology is successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly proposed that the young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology.On in this way can we improve our city easily and can we perfect our life smoothly.

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