部分句子偏简单,注意有错误的句子;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文中词汇表达丰富度要加强,同时要注意单词拼写。
Nowdays,I find that many classmates does not like learn English.Therefor,I am worried about it. As we all konw,English is become more and more important.We can know use English in anywhere.So if you want to go everywhere you must learn English very well.I have some suggest to improve our English. Frist,we should read the English artical loudly which can make our to like English.