若增加一些长难句的使用,文章会更好;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文中词汇表达丰富度要加强,同时要注意单词拼写。
Nowadays,I find that many classmates are not like English.Therefor,I am worried about it. As we all konw,English is become more and more important.We can know use English in anywhere.So if you want to go everywhere you must learn English very well.I have some suggest to improve our English. Frist,we should read the English artical loudly which can make our to like English.