如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇表达不够灵活,但有些单词拼错了。
Nowadays,I find that many classmates are not like the English.Therefore,I am worried about it. As we all know, it is universally acknowledged that Learning English is becoming more and more important.We can know use English in anywhere.So if you want to go everywhere you must learn English very well.I have some suggest improving our English. Frist,we should read the English artical loudly which can make our to like English.