作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者词汇表达不够多样,希望能多使用高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨。
Nowadays,I find that many classmates are not like the English.Therefore,I am worried about it. As we all know, it is universally acknowledged that Learning English is becoming more and more important.We can know use English in anywhere.So if you want to go everywhere you must learn English very well.I have some suggests improving our English. First,we should read the English article loudly,beacuse it can make us to more like the English.