作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Nowadays,I find that many classmates are not like the English.Therefore,I am worried about it. As we all know, it is universally acknowledged that Learning English is becoming more and more important.We can know use English in anywhere.So if you want to go everywhere you must learn English very well.I have some suggests that improving our English. First,we should read the English article loudly,because it can make us to more like the English.Secondly,we also might join some English corron.