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What makes your life is meaningful is a tough question to almost each individual.There are so many small or big things that influence one's life,just such as studying,working, and loving.From my point of view,anything that can makes me smile and happy worth a lot ,and what's more,a life having such thing to pursue is satisfactory and meaningful. Many examples can be given to illustrate this point.For instance,an well-known American writer hellen keller,who was born deaf and blind,however,when she began to learn to touch and feel the beautiful nature,a bright world came to her heart,and life became possible for her to gursue.Even though there were great challenges to overcome,hellen keller never thought of giving up ,instead,since she had experienced the happiness which the outer world brought to her,she was so courageous to get rid of all sorts of hardships.At that moment,i believe,hellen keller was enjoying a meaningful and colourful life. All in all,when one has found a thing or a career worth spending time pursuing ,his life must be meaningful and satisfactory.Additionally,in our normal life,what we can do is enjoy the beauty of life and have one thing worthwhile to work on.
