作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays,I find that many classmates are not like the English.Therefore,I am worried about it. As we all know, it is universally acknowledged that Learning English is becoming more and more important.We can know use English in anywhere.So if you want to go everywhere you must learn English very well.I have some suggests that improving our English. First,we should read the English article loudly,because it can make us to more like the English.Secondly,we might also join some English corners.You know it will improve our speaking English.Last but not least,we should talk with our English teacher,it can help us to find our mistakes.Please belive youself,you mast learn it very well.