文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays,I find that many classmates are not like the English.Therefore,I am worried about it. As we all know, it is universally acknowledged that Learning English is becoming more and more important.We can know use English in anywhere.So if you want to go everywhere you must learn English very well.I have some suggests that improving our English. First,we should read the English article loudly,because it can make us to more like the English.Secondly,we might also join some English corners.You know it will improve our speaking English.Last but not least,we should talk with our English teacher and it can help us to find our mistakes.Please belive yourself.