作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays,I find that many classmates are not like the English.Therefore,I am worried about it. As we all know, it is universally acknowledged that Learning English is becoming more and more important.We can know use English in anywhere.So if you want to go everywhere you must learn English very well.I have some suggests that improving our English. First,we should read the English article loudly,because it can make us to more like the English.Secondly,we might also join some English corners.You know it will improve our speaking English.Last but not least,we should talk with our English teacher and it can help us to find our mistakes.Please believe yourself.You will learn the English very well.