2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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From the part,if i have a foregin friend were going to visit my hometown,i will take him/she visit those old bulidings,original culture and China foods.Now i will share with you about why does me to do. On the one hand,China's old building have some special styles,for example,in Ming dynasity's have the Great Wall，the Frobidden City and the Suzhou's garden,ect.These buildings have many long history.And they have imporant sufficience for China.On the other hand,China food are very well-known by the world areas,most foregin friends like Chinese food.And the China culture is very interesting,like the Near Year Picture.In China,the dragon is symbol strong and powerful. All in all,in China,some places are worthy visit,it is availabe for foregin friends knows China.