2010年上海高考测试题写作范文：合作办刊

从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

I am LiHua,a Senior Grade Two student at our school.I meet your requirements:for one thing,I once worked as an editor in school magazine and equally my work.For another,I have participated in English writing competiton for many times,known how to attart the attention of the reader.Furthermore,I am also a member of association of the campus English writing.I am enclosing resume for you kind consideration and reference.I would very honoed if you could offer me an opportunity for an interview. I am looking forward to your kind reply at your earliest convenience.