错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
From the part,if I have foreign friends were going to visit my hometown,I will take him/she visit those old buildings,original culture and China foods.Now I will share with you about why does me to do. On the one hand,China's old building had some special styles,for example,in Ming dynasty's have the Great Wall,the Frobidden City and the Suzhou's garden,ect.These buildings have a long history.Meanwhile, they have a important sufficience for China.On the other hand,China food are very well-known by the world areas,most foregin friends like Chinese food.And the China culture is very interesting,like the Near Year Picture.In China,the dragon is symbol strong and powerful. All in all,in China,some places are worthy visit,it is availabe for foreign friends knows China.