2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；部分长句用的不错，但从句比例偏少；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

With the development of our technology，computer become more and more important in our daily life.In the city life ,almost every family has a computer .Genernally,people are tending to work out the problems by computer instead of themselves. In my opinion，computer help us decrease the process in some thing，and it is convenient for us to do thing by computer.Such as ,we can buy almost everything on the internet at anytime ,and we cann't had to go to the shops to buy what we need ,whcih is good for us .At the same time,we can get the latest imformation from the internet so as to keep in touch with the world ,so ,on the one hand ,computer is our best friend,and it is beneficial for our life.However,in same way ,computer make people get jin trouble.For example，more and more students find the anwer from the computer when they are doing their homework ,they don't think about the question by themselves .As a matter of fact ,because of the computer ,many teenages lost in themselves,they play the computer games all the day and cann't do anything else .In this situation，computer do harm to some people. In short ,we should control ourselves and make the best of computer and don't let it ruins our life.