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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；文章层次较为清晰；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
The Attitude to The Fustration From the picture we can see that a bottle lying on the ground with some spilled milk. Two men sit aside the bottle and one of they says saddly:" It's all over!" , but the other says:" So lucky that there exist a few!" Whatever do the picture want to tell about? The propose of the picture is telling us that when we get trouble in life, work or studys, different people have different attitude. The active attitude try to find the good side in difficulty, however, the people who keep the negetive mind will always complain the things they lost. In bierf, attitude decised one's height. As far as I can see, we should follow the positive-mind people when we face trouble. Whatever the difficulty we have to face in life, we'd better choose a positive attitude. Only we are active can we make seccess.
