正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Nowadays,I find that many classmates are not like the English.Therefore,I am worried about it. As we all know, it is universally acknowledged that Learning English is becoming more and more important.We can know use English in anywhere.So if you want to go everywhere you must learn English very well.I have some suggests that improving our English. First,we should read the English article loudly,because it can make us to more like the English.Secondly,we might also join some English corners.You know it will improve our speaking English.Last but not least,we should talk with our English teacher and it can help us to find our mistakes.Please believe yourself.Don't be afraid of making mistakes. I am sure we will learn English very well. Thus, all of us should make great progress.