题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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1.对这种做法有人表示支持文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇表达较灵活,可是有些单词拼错了;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Nowday,wherever you go ,you can hear that parents talk about children's art classes .For example ,some kids are sent to learn guita on weekend.And some parents think their children ought to learn art, like drawing 、playing pinon and so forth. Concerning this phemomenon ,opinion vary from person to person .Some persons supporting it maintain that we need cultivate children's art sence when they are a little. And they can possess a skill or some skills to show to their friends when they tke part in activities.Howere there are many persons argue that children should have more time to play with their mates .Taking the art classes spend their most of playing time .And art learning is hard for children and they don't want in their mind. As far as I'm concerned ,every coin has two sides.Taking art classes also has advantages and disadvantages.Parents shoud know what are their kids' intrested in and wheather the children are happy when they are in the classes,and then make a desicion.
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