英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语六级> 真题> 2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2034
要求:

题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

要求

1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者词汇表达较灵活,可是有些单词拼错了;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Nowday,wherever you go ,you can hear that parents talk about children's art classes .For example ,some kids are sent to learn guita on weekend.And some parents think their children ought to learn art, like drawing 、playing pinon and so forth. Concerning this phemomenon ,opinion vary from person to person .Some persons supporting it maintain that we need cultivate children's art sence when they are a little. And they can possess a skill or some skills to show to their friends when they tke part in activities.Howere there are many persons argue that children should have more time to play with their mates .Taking the art classes spend their most of playing time .And art learning is hard for children and they don't want in their mind. As far as I'm concerned ,every coin has two sides.Taking art classes also has advantages and disadvantages.Parents shoud know what are their kids' intrested in and wheather the children are happy when they are in the classes,and then make a desicion.

会员评论0个评论)
llyear
金币:32

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:87.5yls279632779

人气:62发布:2013-11-27

得分:83.5wolves34

人气:57发布:2013-08-07

得分:81.0conginjeno

人气:63发布:2013-05-23

得分:81.0lockheedphoenix

人气:43发布:2013-11-02

得分:80.5a569043015

人气:46发布:2016-03-21