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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富。

用户练习作文:

In recent years,a heated debate was springed up about the view that if it is of great importance for a person to have a good appearance,because a growing number of people are attaching importance to their appearance,some of them even change their figure with surgery. However,people's view about this phenomenon is diverse,some people maintain that it is crucial for a person to have a good appearance,while others argue that it is unequal to judge a person by their appearance. As far as I am concerned,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.Three reasons can account for my view.Firstly,everyone was born equally and unique.They can't select their appearance.Secondly,everyone has right to try their best to pursue their ideal,we don't have right to snatch their ideal.Last but not least,people's succeed don't rely on their figure but their inside skill.For example,Ma Yun and Yu Minhong,they are very successful,but not handsome. To sum up,it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance.

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