全文结构较为严谨;可适当增加复合句的使用,注意个别句子错误;希望高级词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查。
There is a belief that it is unwise to do a conclusion instently relying on what you see or hear.To other words ,we should draw a conclu after think a twice.I can not agree with the saying. Ample exmaple can be cite to illustrate my point of view.To begien with ,when we come across bad something,we must keep claim and have a clear to face it,instead of doing a wrong decide judgeing from others`contents.Further more ,we must have a idear belonging ourself and found the ture by ourself.In addition we can reference advice from others but do not be disrupt by them. I am convienced that it is extremly essential to have a independent view about something,which bring more than we want.
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