全文结构较为严谨;能够使用一些不错的从句;文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。
There is a belief that it is unwise to do a conclusion instintly relying on what you see or hear.To other words,we should draw a conclusion after think a twice.I can not agree with the saying. Ample exmaple can be cite to illustrate my point of view.To begien with ,when we come across bad something,we must keep claim and clear to face it,instead of doing a wrong decide judgeing from others`contents.Further more ,we must have an idear belonging ourself and find the ture by ourselves.In addition we can reference on advice from others but do not be disrupted by them. I am convienced that it is extremly essential to have an independent view about something,which bring more than we want.
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