全文结构较为严谨;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
There is a belief that it is unwise to do a conclusion instantly relying on what you see or hear.To other words,we should draw a conclusion after think a twice.I can not agree with the saying. Ample example can be cite to illustrate my point of view.To begien with ,when we come across bad something,we must keep claim and clear to face it,instead of doing a wrong decision judgeing from others`contents.Furthermore ,we must have an idear belonging ourselves and find the true by ourselves.In addition we can reference on advice from others but do not be disrupted by them. I am convienced that it is extremely essential to have an independent view about something,which bring more than we want.
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