句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;全文结构较为严谨;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
There is a belief that it is unwise to do a conclusion instantly relying on what you see or hear.To other words,we should draw a conclusion twice.I cann·t agree with the saying more. Ample example can be cited to illustrate my point of view.To begien with ,when we come across bad something,we must keep claim and clear to face it,instead of doing a wrong decision judgeing from others`contents.Furthermore ,we must have an idea belonging ourselves and find the true by ourselves.In addition we can reference on advice from others but do not be disrupted by them. I am convienced that it is extremely essential to have an independent view about something,which bring more than we want.
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