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Nowadays many people always get Interpersonal Communications though the Internet. Interpersonal communication refers to the activities of face-to-face information and emotion communication among people. there are some different points about the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication. We can see many advantages from it.For one thing, the wide spread of internet access and the use of QQ, MSN, E-mail, blog,those ways of it always help us get information more quickly and accurately, and they can also broaden our interpersonal circle.For another thing,it provide a convenience way for us to share our life with others.Last but not least,you can communicate with people whenever and whenever though Internet. But every coin has two side.The negative aspects are also apparent. For example, people may spend much time in writing blogs or QQ and ignore othesr around them, and it may be spread, thus influencing the relationships between people in reality. What’s more, if people spend too much time and effort on blog writing, they may have no chance and spirit to have face-to-face communications. Consequently, their ability to deal with people in life may decrease。 Though the above analysis,I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefor I would like to get Interpersonal Communications though the Internet.
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