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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46218
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。

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There is an Education Pays Dialog,which is studied in 2011.I get some information from it.This dialog has two parts,they explain that people who have different degrees has different unemployment rate and median weekly earnings. If people has no degree even didn't graduate from high school,they are unemployment rate is up to fourteen percent,which is much higher than other people,and they're median weekly earnings less than the average much more. But,as the statement,people who has professional degree has better condition in work even than those with doctor degrees. So,in my opinion,teenagers should improve their ability from accepting higher education.It can bring you higher earnings and give you more chance to achieve gools.

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