Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。
There is an Education Pays Dialog,which is studied in 2011.I get some information from it.This dialog has two parts,they explain that people who have different degrees has different unemployment rate and median weekly earnings. If people has no degree even didn't graduate from high school,they are unemployment rate is up to fourteen percent,which is much higher than other people,and they're median weekly earnings less than the average much more. But,as the statement,people who has professional degree has better condition in work even than those with doctor degrees. So,in my opinion,teenagers should improve their ability from accepting higher education.It can bring you higher earnings and give you more chance to achieve goals.