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The importance of keeping a good mood As we know that keeping a good mood is very important in our daily life,however person in modern society live under a lot of pleasure,from education,career,or family.Keeping a good mood becomes more and more difficult.Nevertheless,we should try our best to keep a good mood,it has many benefits for us. First of all,if we keep a good mood,we can get along with our friends or parents.We can understand each other easily,and it can make both of us happy.Second,keeping a good mood can reduce mental disease,as the saying goes. “Cheerfulness is health. Having a light heart is better than taking good medicine to relieve pain and sufferings.So it is true that.Last but not least.Keeping a good mood that we may have a positive attitude when we in danger.That person who have positive attitude will out of danger easily than the pessimism. We need keeping a good mood,rather than like the man of qi who was haunted by the fear that the sky might fall,face everyday with optimism.