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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用偏少;文章词汇使用多样性不足,且单词拼写错误较多。

用户练习作文:

When it comes to judge a person by their appearance ,opinions differ from one to another or different people hold different opinions . There are a number of individuals who hold the positive opinion.they believe that judge a person by their appearance is advantageous for them .what make them convinced is that appearance is very important ,in addition,they claim that appearance make them happy. Others ,however,hold the opposite view.They maintain that ti is unnessary indispensible to judge a person by theri appearance .one rease they believe is that it is unwise to judge a pereson by their appearance .another significant cause is that the ability more importaner that appearance . From my point of view ,nothing is more important than ability.It is unwise to judge a person by their appearance .on the one hand ,it is a fact that the ability is important ,on the other hand ,on one can deny the fact that appearance just look Therefore ,only by doing so can we become strongly.

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