2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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It is great!My good friend ---job will come to my hometown.I am from beijing.The people are proufed of The Great Wall.so,i am planted to take her to visite The Great Wall. The Great Wall is one of the chinese greatplaces with history in china.It was built qingshihuang and took lots of labors.It is reprented of chinese history and development.I will take job to visit The Great Wall to know people deeply. I am ready everthing to welcome to china of beijing.