文中过渡词和衔接词使用较少;文中从句使用不丰富;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强。
I have a good friend,she is a beautiful girl.she has two big eyes,and a red mouth,and long hairs . we have been good friends for many years,and she can help me for my study. she is good at writing and swimming, i like her very much .we will be friends forveer.