语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇积累很好,不过单词拼写方面要继续努��。
nowadays ,most of peopel have a habits that they will make a desation when they see something or hear something ,that is not smart .There are some reasons as follows . first of all ,there is a saying that don't be covered by you eyes .sometimes ,the thing you see is not turth .for example ,when two peopel are arguing ,they maybe are making a joking. second ,peopel should not make a descaton fastly .give some time to themselves to think .finally ,peopel like making a performs recently ,so do not believe your eyes and ears. so i think when you meet a problem ,you should pause a moment to think,in order to get a better result.
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