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We should confirm the truth by evidence In our daily life, people always easy be coufused by hearing what others say or what others looking even only by their mind. However, it's unadvisible that people put forward a conclument as soon as hearing something or seeing something. There are many mistakes made by the misunderstanding in one's own eyes or ears. For example, some parents watching their child was talking happly with their friends, then they might considered they were having fun and began to critized them.However, after they asked them, the children were discussing the question on book.
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